the young's life style nowadays

Nowadays Viet Nam as well as the other has changed rapidly many things to develop itself and suit for the age such as the economy, the polity, the culture even the people. As a result, our life has been improving better and better and the style of people nowadays has changed too especially the young. In fact, they are more intelligent, active, and daring. But someone said that the young's life style nowadays have become negative. And according to me, I think this sentence is right.


First, the young nowadays are too free. They can do any thing they like such as wear what they want,do what they like, and go any where they like. Moreover, they do not care about the other who around them is thinking of them. Event their parents, for example, when they have problem, they ignore all advises from their parent because they think that their parents are too old to help them. They want to solve the problem by themselves without asking the older. Besides that, they love freely. They love and easily live together as couples. They do not pay attention to the bad result in the future and the others. But the young in the past are different. They always think carefully and ask experiences from the older before they want to do something. They always  respect their parents and the older. Especially in love, they always ask permission from their parents. Because any parents love their children, and want their children to enjoy the best life. So they will give right decisions.



On the other hand, the young nowadays is too lazy. The first, they are lazy in thinking. For example, when they encounter difficulties they do not think a lot to find out the solution. And they complain and blame on the situation. The second, they are very lazy in studying or working. They do not want to studying or working hard. They can not determine the reason why they must study or work hard because they have no marks, goals or dreams. Furthermore they  tend to live based on their parents. They do not want to earn money. They just ask money from their parent and come into that money by buying expensive things, they spend time and money on going to night clubs,bars, playing games online. Even they smoke, drink alcohol, using drugs, etc. They do not know how hard their parents had worked to earn that money and their parents believe in them a lot. Moreover, that tend is one of deep causes of crime. Why? One day, they have no money but they are too lazy. They do not want to go out to earn money. So, they will do many serious things such as become stealing money, robbing, killing etc. And I am sure that they will become criminals early.



Our country is developing to be well-matched the others country in the world. And the young is the most important factor to build, protect and develop country.  However we should look back the young in the past and the young nowadays. We will be very surprised they are too different because the more quickly the society has changed, the more negative the young has become.

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  2. Maybe you should add some good points of the teenagers nowadays because besides everything that you told, there are many good teenagers live in a active way at the present ...

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