MY MOTHER AND I

Who is your ideal? That may be a famous singer, a beautiful actor or actress, a film star or a lovely model. And I, my idea is just a normal person whom I admire most is my mother. In in eyes, she is the most perfect woman. Sometimes I feel happy and proud when some one said I am similar to her. In fact, my mother and I are similar but also we are different in some ways.

First, both my mother and I have same face. We have brown eyes, high nose, small lips and especially the ears. They do not have any difference. People joke that we are the twins because if they look quickly or from far, they can not recognize exactly. Moreover, we also have the same voice. I still remember that day one of my friend's mother phoned to my mother but my mother was not at home. And I answered it but friend of my mother could not recognize me until I said to her my mother was not at home. Second, both of us have same hobbies. We also like listening to music when free time, going shopping hours in the market at weekend, and our interesting food which we like is egg. We like eating all kinds of eggs such as fried egg, boiled egg, steamed egg, etc. We like so much that we can eat egg every day without the other food.

Despite our similarities, my mother and I are different. My mother is a diligent woman. She does all housework. For example, she cleans the house twice a day, she washes our family's clothes, and she takes cares of each member in family without complaint. On the contrary, I am very lazy. As a result, my room is always in a mess and it is hard to find some thing quickly. My mother often reminds me but it has no changes. Besides that, she is introspective person. She does not like going out, talking with a lot of people or going to crowded place. But I am opposite, I like going out to meet many people, making new friends, join in some socical activities such as giving blood, green summer, charity, etc. So the time I stay at home is short and my mom worry about me a lot.

My mother and I not only have many the same things but also we have the diffirent things. And I think these makes our life more interesting and joyful.

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