The outline: Memory
+ Introduction:
+ Introduction:
Memories which happen in the past, everytime we think about, we have some special emotions and feelings. Each of us has a lot of memories. They may be good, happy memories or bad, terrible memories. And in my child hood, I had a terrile memory which up to now, I have not forgotten,and I will never forget. (thesic statement).
+ Body:
paragraph 1: - the background of the memory
- the specific details of the memory
- some my feelings at that time
+ Conclusion:
It is not easy to forget a memory especially sad memory. Although it had happened for a long time,I can not forget. Whenever I think about it my heart always feels hurt.
Grammar is good
Trả lờiXóaLogical is good
Coherence is fair
Unity is good
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