Memory

                          The outline:     Memory

 + Introduction:
          Memories which happen in the past, everytime we think about, we have some special emotions and feelings. Each of us has a lot of memories. They may be good, happy memories or bad, terrible memories. And in my child hood, I had a terrile memory which up to now, I have not forgotten,and I will never forget. (thesic statement).
+ Body:
         paragraph 1:  - the background of the memory
                                  - the specific details of the memory
                                  - some my feelings at that time
+ Conclusion:
         It is not easy to forget a memory especially sad memory. Although it had happened for a long time,I can not forget. Whenever I think about it my heart always feels hurt.
                                





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