Memories which happen in the past whenever we think about we have special feeling and emotion. They are both good memories and bad memories. For me, bad memories are usually more unforgetable than good memories. In fact, when I was ten years old, I had a terrible day which up to now, I have not forgotten.
That day, after school, I went home quickly because my grand mother was going to visit my house. I wanted to go home soon to meet my grand mother. We have not met for a long time. I was very happy. I ran to home. Finally, I stood at the gate, I heard the loud sound from my house. I worried... I pressed the bell many times but no one opened the door. Waiting some minutes, my brother opened the door. I asked about our grand mother but he said she had problem and she could not come here. And he did not say more. His face looked anxious. When I was in the sitting room, my parents were sitting on the sofa and they looked sad. "What's happening?" but no one answered me. I felt some thing happened and it must be very terrible. I looked at my mom's face, her eyes were wet and red. I asked her the reason why but she just looked at me and said nothing. I looked my dad and asked him why. He raised his face, looked down and kept silent. I realized that my parents had a big problem. My heart beat faster. I felt uncomfortable. My brother drew me out, he said our parent had just argued and he explained the reason. Because my dad said my grand is not enough health to come to my house and the distance is too far. My dad suggested that we would visit her another time but my mom disagreed. I have just heard that, I was very angry. I rush in to sitting - room, shouted to my dad "You are too bad. I miss my grand mother! I hate you! ". After that, I ran in to my room, slammed the door strongly. My heart felt hurt. And I cried, cried, cried a lot because he did not permit my grand mother to visit us. At that time I did not understand well and I though that my dad was too selfish. After a long time, when I older, I realized that it was not my dad's fault.I was angry myself. He was right. If that day my dad had agreed, our grand would have met unlucky thing because the weather.
When we were a child, we had a lot memories and some memories we can not forget. In deed, that day is a unforgetable day. And whenever I think about that day I feel I was too foolish and rude with my dad. In my life, that day I will remember forever.
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Memories which happen in the past whenever we think about we have special feeling and emotion. They are both good memories and bad memories. For me, bad memories are usually more unforgetable than good memories. In fact, when I was ten years old, I had a terrible day which up to now, I have not forgotten.That day, after school, I went home quickly because my grand mother was going to visit my house.
- I felt happy and wanted to go home
- the loud sound from my house, I pressed bell, my brother open, his face looked sad -> I worried.
- in the sitting room: my parents looked sad too. no one answer me when I asked
- mom's eyes were red and wet, my dad just looked me and kept silent -> some thing happened and that was big promblem
- my brother drew me and explained : my dad disagreed my grand to visit because of her age and the distance.
- I was angry and shouted. I ran to my room, slammed the door and cried. because I miss her but he did not allow her to come here. I hated him.
- later, I realized it was not his fault. He was right. If he had accepted, my grand would have met problem.
When we were a child, we had a lot memories and some memories we can not forget. In deed, that day is a unforgetable day. And whenever I think about that day I feel I was too foolish and rude with my dad. In my life, that day I will remember forever.
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